I figured I'd post them here since class was cancelled...
I chose to do a night out at the opera--opening night is typically the 'gala' night where everyone dresses up. I chose 'Carmen' as the performance--most people know it. :) Dior, Raplh Lauren, Burberry, and Stella McCartney are the style inspiration! :D
-Alyssa
Not bad! I think the first page is a little stiff, and need more to pull my eye in. I think panel 1 is sort of awkwardly crotch-centric. I think page 2 panels 1,2,&3 look like they could be really fun. I think the last one needs a lot of work too. Maybe you need to find a way to show that they're having a good time together. Also think about what all of the other people there will do to the composition, and how you can use that to your advantage.
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