I still think the figures are a little anatomically wonked, but They're better than the first round. Make sure to spend as much time as possible thinking about that and doing observational sketching. I also think that the pencil line stuff doesn't really clean up well the way you're doing it. I'd like to see a little more detail in these clothes, but for the most part the girls look fun. I'm consistently grossed out by Sven's knob. I assume he's pretty into that and has a wardrobe filled with alarming knob-wear. I'm looking forward to seeing your "Night Out" pieces. Don't bring Sven. He's a health hazard.