tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1596276150417711025.post1549276670699664898..comments2023-02-14T12:26:37.107-08:00Comments on Life Style: Body & Behavior: Barbara Tarrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12959752654316836294noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1596276150417711025.post-79733402969440631302010-02-12T00:25:08.201-08:002010-02-12T00:25:08.201-08:00I think she should murder him in a public space (a...I think she should murder him in a public space (an alleyway/hotel/more creative public space). That way, it fits the assignment better (a killer night out, not in) and creates a more interesting narrative than just a domestic murder after a date. Also, your digital colors are a little dull and can be uninspiring. I think your colors could improve by hand-mixing colors in a wet media. Maybe you could do this project in a media with more physicality than digital has? Oh, and before you go to final, make sure it's 8x11 and not 8.5x11.Jimmy Malonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02432176887437996637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1596276150417711025.post-77464909000515897372010-02-10T12:14:43.770-08:002010-02-10T12:14:43.770-08:00Thanks Jen! Those Steven Klein photo's were se...Thanks Jen! Those Steven Klein photo's were sexy :P<br />Yea I think I'll try to add some more scenes in to show how the night plays out. Originally I was just going to do the two I had colored, one scene on each 8 1/2 x 11 page. The two I colored were simply showing the beginning of the date and how it ends. Thanks for the suggestions!<br />As for the clothes, I think I may dress them in more crazy/sexy outfits...I'm likin' Dolce Gabbana and BurberryKristin Hugheshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08465338099777138278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1596276150417711025.post-29050842056515220482010-02-10T10:40:25.428-08:002010-02-10T10:40:25.428-08:00Oh, also: who designed the clothes you're usin...Oh, also: who designed the clothes you're using?jen mussarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12193994197062610227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1596276150417711025.post-77201583225416568112010-02-10T10:40:01.459-08:002010-02-10T10:40:01.459-08:00Hey Kristin! I like the top piece alot, it makes ...Hey Kristin! I like the top piece alot, it makes me want to know what they are eating and where they are eating it, so that I can go there, too. I'm wondering if you can get some more seductiveness in here, however, because your plot seems like it has alot of potential to be dark-sexy rather than just gory. I would suggest looking at Steven Klein's photography, especially his Dolce Gabbana ads. http://www.stevenkleinstudio.com/www/index.html<br />Also, will there be more than one illustration on each page or just one? I think Dan may have been looking for something a little more varied. And you can fit more of your storyline in, too!jen mussarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12193994197062610227noreply@blogger.com